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A Crack In The Sky is a neat wee novel for children starting to read bigger books. The chapters are relatively small so kids may just read one or two chapters at a time and then go back to it later. This story has happy and sad parts to it. When Connor's mum rips her skirt on their sofa they decide to buy a new one. On their budget however they cannot afford one. So Connor thinks he is one lucky boy when he sees a red sofa bobbing in the bay. He runs home to tells his mother.

 Sceptically they manage to get it home with the help from some neighbours.
The problem arises one day when Connor realises he's no longer at home, he's in a strange land with people he doesn't know, but somehow when he starts talking to them he suddenly remembers everyone's names. Connor then sets off for discovering where he is, how he got there and how he can get back to his Mum.
This story is very involved and keeps the reader wanting to know what happens next. But is there a happy ending??
I will be recommending this to others.

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Here's another short, but very insightful, review http://tvnz.co.nz/lifestyle/crack-in-sky-book-review-3673927

Awesome!  At first I thought this book  looked boring but I'm not a cover reader you know so I read the first chapter and I couldn't stop myself. Before I knew it I was at the end. 

Katia Kennedy (age 7)

Tilda wanted a pet monkey because she wanted someone who was good at climbing to play with on the flying fox. She had a fight with Nat because she wasn't good at climbing and she fell. Tilda thought the monkey would be good to climb with. Pop Hooper gave Tilda a monkey but it ran away so Pop gave Tilda a turtle for the night cause they are slow but they get there in the end. But Tilda was sad she wanted a monkey. Tilda felt cross because Pickle the turtle was so slow and in the end she put her under her arm to walk because she could not wait for her.

It was sad when Tilda and Nat would not be friends and when Tilda lost Pickle and her friendship bracelet.

 Nat came and helped Tilda find Pickle and the bracelet and made friends. Tilda found out that Pickle liked swimming in her pond and that Pickle was a bit like Nat. Nat fixed the flying fox and Tilda decided to keep Pickle. It was cool when Nat and Tilda and Pickle went in the flying fox box together. It was funny when Tilda tried to make Pickle go to sleep in her drawer!!

Reviewed by Joshua Thompson,7

In Funny Little Dog Flynn wants a guard dog and he wants to name it Chomper. Pop Hooper gives him a little dog that can’t protect him called Pumpkin. It was a very cool book and Kyle is a great author. My favourite part was when Flynns dad thought Pumpkin was cute and said he should keep him. It was exciting when Flynn lost Pumpkin at the rubbish dump. I felt sad when Flynn went to take Pumpkin back to Pop Hooper.

Reviewed by Joshua Thompson, Blockhouse Bay Primary, Age 6

 

Scruffy Old Cat is a really great book because it’s funny and cute and I didn’t want it to end. Lily thought that the cat Sardine was really ugly and disgusting, but she ended up loving him so much that she didn’t want her perfect fluffy, white cat from Pop Hooper’s Perfect Pets truck anymore. I think the message is - things and people that seem really perfect on the outside, don’t always have a perfect personality.

Reviewed for Readings by Yolanda Tait-Atkin,  St Kilda East, Age 8

A complete package this one : a beautifully produced hardback with sumptuous illustrations and a heartwarming tale about life and death. Rachel Driscoll's painterly illustrations and Mewburn's moving prose capture the emotions of a young hu-hu beetle who can't believe his fearless friend, Old Hu-Hu, has died. Eventually, little Hu-Hu-Tu realises that Old Hu-Hu lives on within him and he has to treasure the memories of his friend flying to the moon, riding a dog and taking a centipede in a boxing match.

Graham Hepburn Canvas

Old Hu-Hu

 

A treasure appeared in my mailbox today - Old Hu-hu written by the irrepressible Kyle Mewburn. ... though I always have an unquiet murmur in the back of my mind when I see animals with human characteristics (have you ever seen a hu-hu bug with a moustache?) ... I'll forgive this as the overall emotion and depth of the book is taken to a new level with Rachel's beautifully crafted illustrations. A labour of love I'd say, from both the author and the illustrator. There are not many books on this topic and I think it's been dealt with beautifully... with not a mention of God or Heaven in sight.

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With Duck's Stuck! this team has produced another lively picture book somewhat reminiscent of the traditional tale The Turnip. However, there's a twist in the tale here. Greedy duck has spied an open sack of grain in the shed and squeezed his head through a crack in the planks to feast on the unex­pected bounty. Alas, he cannot pull it back and one by one, the other farmyard animals come along to inspect the situation.

This is a story that reads aloud well, there's a cadence to the language which rolls off the tongue satisfyingly and will lead to many re-readings. Perfect for pre-schoolers. A great addition to home and library collections.

Ellen Carter, Magpies

Duck's stuck!

 

Duck smart. Duck clever. Sees hole. Smells food. Sticks in head. Gets stuck. Stupid duck. In a nutshell, this is the problem faced by our duck and all the farmyard animals try various methods to resolve the problem. As is often the case, it is the meek that inherit the earth, and it is a rat that comes up with the final solution, and is amply rewarded for its good sense. Echoing the brevity of the duck's quack, language here is reduced to its essence as the focus of each sentence highlights a dramatic moment in the ongoing resolution of duck's dilemma - a delightful play with patterns of language.

John McKenzie Reading Time

 

WHEN SIAN CAN'T SLEEP SHE counts sheep from one to ten, then she counts them again. She never counts the eleventh sheep. One night the eleventh sheep jumps into Sian's dreams. Then each night Sian and the eleventh sheep have fun together...

But the eleventh sheep dreams of being back in the fields with the other sheep. With some rhyming text, delightful full colour pictures and an enchanting little story, this hard cover picture story book will be loved by children as young as three. It gives you a lovely warm feeling as you read it.

This is a perfect bedtime story and a wonderful stimulant for discussion on dreams with a humorous ending.

Joan Steinman Ballarat Courier

The eleventh sheep

 

 

For anyone who has trouble sleeping this early childhood book should appeal with its emphasis on the's' and 'ee' words and sounds that provide a link to numerical concepts.

Sian cannot sleep so sHe calls on rollicking ruminants to help her. The occasional rhyme, tongue twister and onomatopoeia ensure that this is a read aloud shared experience picture book between adult and young child. The illustrations use big images with a bright colourful palette depicting the narrative without too much confusion. A dream sequence moves into familiar fantasy territory and at the end, there is a cute twist.

Helen Martin Reading Time

No Room For a Mouse is wonderfully crafted nonsense that echoes the easy, playful inventiveness of an earlier generation of children's writers. It has an internal logic that renders mum's eccentric activity and the various bizarre circumstances of the people's homelessness as perfectly natural, not to forget the curious cast of house guests and their daffy names.

And there is Freya Blackwood's illustration that captures superbly all the bedlam and whimsy in Christopher's house. Crowded rooms everywhere yet every person a distinct individual engaged in their own activity. Amidst the chaos, the fussy, intent image of mum amusingly oblivious to it all. Like Christopher, little readers will wander wide-eyed across the pages lighting on all the different activity and wondering where it will all end up.

Kevin Steinberger, Magpies

No room for a mouse

 

This is an entertaining story about a boy, Christopher, who lives in a large rambling house with his mother. She runs the local pigeon post and is extremely busy but slightly absent minded. Christopher is a compassionate child. The mouse is his pet mouse, Sneaky who spends a lot of time exploring the illustration plates in the book. Together, Christopher and Sneaky encounter a number of people who are down on their luck and in need of a place to live. There's the family whose house was flooded, the Orchestra who's concert hall was invaded by bees and the circus whose big top was eaten by termites. Chris and Sneaky invite them all to live at their big old rambling house ... and that's when the fun begins.

This picture book operates on a number of levels and gets more interesting with each read. There are novels of information and side stories in the marvellous illustrations. The pigeons alone could do with their own franchise. A highlight is the Viking who learns to ballet. Suitable for ages 5 and up.

David Murphy Reading Time

No room for a mouse is a wonderful, beautifully designed picture book created for children by a writer and illustrator of talent who have applied themselves to delighting their audience, rather than sending their own talents for a run around the park

Wondering why there are so many empty rooms in the house he shares with his mum, a boy invites a bunch of increasingly weird people home. Mum - whose distracted personality is perfectly pinpointed by her polka dot dress ­is too busy working for the pigeon post to notice, until the house is full and there's no room for the mouse.

Author Kyle Mewburn gets the tone of playful nonsense perfectly without a forced note, while Freya Blackwood's skill and delicacy make her very special indeed.

If there is a message in this book, it is about that rare commodity, generosity of spirit, but it is so much a part of the book's texture (and one suspects its creators) that it is never difficult to swallow.

Meg Sorensen, Sydney Herald

This story is about a situation familiar in most families: the small boy who flees when his aunt arrives, demanding kisses. When the sloppy kisses come (Kiss! Kiss! On the left cheek. Kiss! Kiss! On the right cheek.) Andy thinks to himself Yuck! Yuck! On each weekly visit he finds a better hiding place - the pig pen, the chicken coop, under the house - but Aunt Elsie always lures him out. Then Aunt Elsie falls off a camel in Australia and breaks her leg. Andy waits in vain for Aunt Elsie. Finally she arrives - on crutches. Andy runs to meet her and gives her two big, sloppy kisses.

Picture and text combine perfectly in a single narrative drive. The deceptively simple illustrations are a skilful mix of pencil drawings and collage (using photos and fabrics) with some digital detailing done by computer. (Aunt Elsie's dresses - in colourful floral fabric - are particularly impressive.)

Trevor Agnew, Magpies

KISS!KISS! YUCK!YUCK!

 

 

 

 

Kissing aunties are probably dreaded by most young children and Andy's rotund Aunty Elsie is no exception. Andy always hides when she comes and the artists, who share equally with the writer in telling the story, help create tension by picturing her from Andy's view point. We can see Andy hiding under the bed or in the chicken house, but all we see of Aunty Elsie are her legs in to die for shoes, as she gets closer and closer to his hiding place. As I was reading I wanted to shout, 'She's coming Andy'.

One week, when Aunty Elsie is due, Andy hides, but Aunty Elsie doesn't come that week or for weeks after that. When she does finally arrive all we see is the bottom of two crutches and a foot in plaster. There is a delightfully heart warming, humorous twist at the end and the story is satisfactorily resolved.

This quality picture book won the Joy Cowley award. Highly recommended.

Margaret Kedian, Magpies

 

Ant's Pants

Slightly carnivalesque in its humour, this story tells of the mayhem that is caused when Ant's mother buys him baggy pants, the fanicest pants he had ever seen, but when he sneezed, the pants fell down to his knees. Misadventure piles on misadventure, and both Ant and his pants undergo a transformation. The end may leave you splitting with laughter. Inconsequential perhaps, but no doubt aspects of the tall tale may well amuse the emerging young reader.

John McKenzie Reading Time

Ant enjoys wearing his new fancy pants until they fall to his ankles exposing smiley-faced underwear. For children, much of the fun in this over-the-top story will revolve around this exposure (think of the popularity of Captain Underpants) and in Ant's final dilemma. A good read aloud too.

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"Muddletopia was the most confusing planet in the galaxy". Everyone looks alike and all the buildings look the same, so people often end up in the wrong place.

Then Malvina the Magnificent, Queen of Muddletopia, sick of being mistaken for the cleaning lady, enacts a new law, that everything in Muddletopia will be clearly labelled, including people's "Official Muddle-free Hats".

At first  all goes well in the process of Un­Muddlefication but then young Karley decides she doesn't want to wear a hat labelled Child. Then an amazing series of unexpected events leads to a change of hats for everyone.

By the end of this amusing allegory, Muddletopia has become the most interesting place in the universe. Dave Gunson's lively cartoon illustrations add to the fun.

Trevor Agnew, Magpies

Muddletopia

 

 

Muddletopia is a confusing place to live - everything and everyone looks the same! When the Queen decrees that everything must be labelled, Karley is very disgruntled by her ill-fitting hat that labels her as 'child'.

Grabbing a 'Fire Chief hat after a convenient earthquake shakes up everyone (and their hats), Karley embarks upon an amazing series of wacky adventures as life becomes even more chaotic than before.  Mewburn's crazy story, ably extended by Gunson's illustrations, has a string of amazingly convenient coincidences. This should appeal to kids who appreciate the drama of a belly-laugh, for others it may well be incomprehensible.

Ellen Carter, Magpies

 

This story is going to cause some knowing looks from quite a few mums and will sound alarmingly familiar for many dads. Josh is a brave young lad. Not only is Josh very brave but he is full of great ideas and has a huge curiosity. One night as he is curled up asleep in his bed he is woken by a loud, grumbling, growling sound. Josh quickly realises there's a bear in his parents' bedroom and they might need saving.

But this bear is almost as clever as Josh and Josh has to devise and revise a very cunning plan to catch the bear and save his parents.

Deborah Hinde's colourful illustrations are very appealing and capture Josh's personality perfectly. This is an amusing picture book that gradually escalates until it reaches the amusing (and surprising?) climax which will leave young readers giggling but also included is a twist in the tale.

Marlborough Express

The Bear in the

Room Next Door

 

Josh is woken up by a snuffling sound. He notices a shadow on the wall and knows it to be a bear in his parent's room. Fearlessly Josh attempts to track down the bear. This involves snapping on the light while his parents are sound asleep. Repeatedly Josh tries new tactics to find the bear and repeatedly the parent's light is snapped on. After the story is satisfactorily resolved there is a twist at the end which then leaves the story open-ended -a clever technique. This is detective fiction for three- to four-year­olds. It's a heart-warming tale of a small child whose imagination keeps him awake at night and very relatable for this age group and their parents who will be reading it to them.

The double-spread realistic paintings by Deborah Hinde are boldly colourful. Her clever use of complete lack of white space has the effect of drawing us into the rooms where the story takes place. Recommended.

Margaret Kedian, Magpies

In this delightful fantasy designed to stimulate the imagination, careful examination of the final illustration reveals that all is not what it seems. The ironic relationship between image and narrative comes to the fore as we learn to doubt the voice of the narrator and the concept of normality! The illustrator has precisely captured this play on expectations. The cottage gardens are suggestive of utopia. Butterflies flutter and a dog lazily sleeps on a lounge chair. But there are unsettling details as we begin to read the illustrations: caterpillar handles, mushrooms growing through the floors and (surprise) a magazine entitled Saurian Way! That's just the beginning ... This is a good introduction for the middle school child to begin to acquire new skills in decoding picture books using such ideas as intertextuality, irony and double coding. Highly recommended.

John McKenzie Talespinner

 

The Hoppleplop

Addressing the reader directly, the writer invites us into his house on a search for a missing Hoppleplop. Every room is visited and in each a different creature is revealed all enjoying themselves in various ways. Some are quite ordinary like a sleepy cat but others quite extraordinary - the Ooblangitan from next door and the Gobbling which came down in a thunderstorm and moved in some years before. This is a wonderfully imaginative story with plenty more ideas to discuss in the illustrations.

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The storyteller takes the reader on a journey through his very fanciful house in search of the Hoppleplop, which lives there. It's a quaint house with doorknobs of a mushroom, cup­cake and caterpillar. The basin is a shell resting on a branch and there are snails, mice and ladybirds galore. Tension is cleverly created in the story by author and illustrator who carry equal weight in telling the story. As the reader hurries through the text to find the Hoppleplop we are constantly delayed by the detail of the illustrations.

Deborah Hinde's illustrative style is reminiscent of the artwork in the Pookie Stories of forty, fifty years ago.  Perhaps artwork is like fashion. If you've been around long enough the style comes back in again and those of us who have done it before are filled with nostalgia. If you are a middle-aged buyer go and buy the book and see if you agree with me.

Margaret Kedian, Magpies

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